TRSB #1 ... sort of finished

This story was about Tuor & Idril.  I hadn't written them before, and I'm really not convinced I've done a good job.  The story seems over-long and rather unwieldy, and it has a kind of wobbly saggy bit which I am really not sure how to fix.  

But it has a beginning, a middle and an end.  

Perhaps I can revise and trim it a bit later.  The second story for TRSB is well underway and I hope that will be shorter and not so flabby. 


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